A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences.
It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic.
Crafting an original, insightful, and memorable thesis makes a distinct impression on a reader.
You will lose credibility as a writer if you become only a mouthpiece or a copyist; you will gain credibility by grabbing the reader with your own ideas and words.
Every paper you write should have a main point, a main idea, or central message.
Never assume that the meaning of a sentence is obvious.
Check to see if you need to define your terms (”socialism," "conventional," "commercialism," "society"), and then decide on the most appropriate place to do so.