It is fine enough to simply say that "Most parents do not realize the dangers involved when their children log onto the Internet (sic)" but this statement - arguably a very bold one - has no factual evidence provided and thus does not help the argument at all.
In fact, it could pass as erroneous because I'm certain parents are made very well aware of the dangers their children face and they act accordingly to ensure that their child is safe.
One of the most important forms of communication and entertainment is television. Television is an important form of communication but as everything else is it has its disadvantages.
Another reason TV is affecting people is that more and more people are becoming obese, because instead of doing exercise and living a healthy life they sit and watch television.
Computers can also be dangerous, because you never know when you will get a devastating virus that could ruin your entire equipment and cause a high price for replacement.
And for similar reasons computer games can be violent and can also give a false sense of family environment. This is a Writing to Argue task, and in it, the candidate takes a very relevant topic that is often of great concern to a large number of people and makes a fair argument against the "addiction" to computers. Read full review This is a Writing to Argue task, and in it, the candidate takes a very relevant topic that is often of great concern to a large number of people and makes a fair argument against the "addiction" to computers.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one TV set at home.Television has been a popular means of entertainment for a long time.An argument needs stronger language than the basic vocabulary that is used here.A further issue with this candidate's answer is the sweeping generalisations and poorly-evidence opinion-as-fact.The improvement of your punctuation will just refine the structure and confidence of your answer, so get learning how to use those colons and semi-colons accurately, to gain higher QWC marks. In some families, there is more than one television in the home with each family member even having their own TV.One particularly good example of this is young people admitting that watching lots of violent films is the reason why they fight and want to be violent towards others.Another disadvantage of having more than one TV set per home is utilities.A sense of family belonging could be lost over time because family members will want to access differing types of TV entertainment.Members of the family will spend less time together which could encourage children to behave badly because of the lack of parental control over TV content.